Superman

[ajkarp]

A quick sketch. I would request some feedback but that doesn't always work for me so I'll have to try something else. If I don't get any feedback I'm going to belittle this cat! (Hermie, my cat is nearby)
http://i734.photobucket.com/albums/ww350/ajkarp/Kalel080.jpg

[Bruce Lee]

Hey, man. First of all let me say that you've come a long way since your first posts on PJ. Your proportions and anatomy are both getting better. There's still work to be done for sure, but you're showing improvement here, so I think you're on your way. The foreshortening on Superman's left arm is awesome! No way could you pull that off when you first started posting here. I'd say you're definitely making some huge strides, and I hope you keep it up.

You need to work on drawing legs more. Superman's right thigh in particular looks odd.

I know it's sometimes a struggle to get people to reply to posts, but don't let that get you down, and don't take that personally. People just sometimes get busy, and posts get buried.

Keep up the good work.

Loston

[willesee]

I agree with loston, your feet look a little funky as well...im still waiting for when loston opens up his own Loston School of Comic Arts and Design

[Eric Henson]

I agree with loston, your feet look a little funky as well...im still waiting for when loston opens up his own Loston School of Comic Arts and Design

I'd be the first to sign up!

This Superman has a few anatomy issues (mentioned above) but the overall figure is a huge move forward. Nice sketch!

[ajkarp]

Loston, Will ,and Eric thanks for the words of encouragement. It really means alot to me since I don't have any local art peers/friends whose opinions and critiques can propel me up off this stagnant plateau. You guys are my brethren.