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Chiboy!
02-24-2010, 03:15 PM
second attempt at digital painting. almost done.
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h209/chiboyz/swordchickyyy.jpg

scmarooney
02-24-2010, 11:01 PM
Looks really good, Chiboy! Impressive, considering it's only your 2nd attempt at digital painting! What program are you digitally painting with?

kae_ae
02-24-2010, 11:05 PM
very nice. could prolly nitpick but i think the only glaring thing looks off is the lighting on the scarf thingie.

Chiboy!
02-24-2010, 11:26 PM
Thanks.

I'm using Photoshop.

Yes, I agree on the cape/scarf. Will try and correct.

Symson
02-24-2010, 11:29 PM
Second attempt? Really? You inspire me to start doing digital painting.

Well done. Some nit picks.

You're obviously using model or photo, but don't be a slave to your reference.

The lines under her neck may be there in real life, but they age her. Her body posture is relaxed, so her neck shouldn't look strained. Save that for the action shots.

The rim lighting on the left arm looks odd. Since we see most of it on her right side, this seems out of place.

Since this is in progress I'm hoping the fabric and the sword will have different textures.

Looking forward to seeing how you handle the background.

golgotha
02-25-2010, 07:06 AM
it seems like she is resting the heavy sword on her shoulder. that would be very painful. her skin looks very well colored. i like it.

Genesis
02-25-2010, 08:23 AM
First, that's awesome. Everything seems to be coming along nicely.
Second, something that bothers me a little, her right arms seems really, really stiff. Almost painfully so. Maybe if you relaxed her elbow and her hand? I would suggest resting her hand on her hip but I think everybody does that...

Chiboy!
02-25-2010, 12:47 PM
Second attempt? Really? You inspire me to start doing digital painting.

Well done. Some nit picks.

You're obviously using model or photo, but don't be a slave to your reference.

The lines under her neck may be there in real life, but they age her. Her body posture is relaxed, so her neck shouldn't look strained. Save that for the action shots.

The rim lighting on the left arm looks odd. Since we see most of it on her right side, this seems out of place.

Since this is in progress I'm hoping the fabric and the sword will have different textures.

Looking forward to seeing how you handle the background.

Sweet, I'll tell my wife that she looks old. Thanks for that.

Skothu23
02-25-2010, 01:06 PM
Damn your wife is hot! awesome digi-painting

StudioMe
02-25-2010, 02:14 PM
nice job....conisdering a background, or just a character study?

Symson
02-25-2010, 02:51 PM
Sweet, I'll tell my wife that she looks old. Thanks for that.

Now that's not something you want to do. ;-)

You can take the most beautiful woman and if you draw all the lines that are actually on her face in real life she will look old.

The same applies to children.

Children and women need to be draw with as few lines as possible to keep a youthful appearance.

nightfingers
02-25-2010, 07:47 PM
redo the sword hand. looks deformed.